Fragrance of the wind

Sunday, September 21, 2008

WHEN YOU LEFT..

The world fell silent, not even dark,
All sounds blanked out, with time so dry,
It all seemed like ne'er before, but why?
Did it mean anything or was it a significant mark?
I saw a thousand faces, but none about lark,
I heard a thousand words, but all seemed a lie,
The sounds heard were all of a cry,
Like the thoughts and words that sailed with the bark..
Was that a poor vapid dream? My soul was pained,
My very soul, to have slept while others woke..
Everything black, thunder struck, sorrows like swords rained,
Was it true that my love left, with pain to revolt?
But, just then I realised, it was none a joke,
Without my love, my life and soul all drained..

Love,
Rakshitha.S

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5 Comments:

Blogger Citizen said...

hi.....
i am charles....can we good friends?...good poems u have written....i like it....wish u all the best.tc.bye

December 26, 2008 at 10:15 AM  
Blogger Rakesh Pathak said...

very nice ..

September 28, 2009 at 3:09 PM  
Blogger rakshitha.s said...

thank u..!

November 6, 2009 at 11:23 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice one :)

November 16, 2009 at 10:26 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

one of my favourites...can totally relate to it...
amazing!

July 9, 2010 at 11:04 PM  

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