‘M HERE TO STAY
‘M here to stay,
Not go away,
I looked at you,
And you went astray..
I waited as you walked away,
Hoping you’ll turn back and say,
“ ‘M not going anywhere,
‘M here to stay..”
I waited for you,
Far away, at the bay,
I loved you,
But still dint say..
My heart leaped bounds,
Without uttering a single sound,
I wish you heard it,
Just as I turned around..
I was time’s fool,
As I waited for you,
With all my hopes,
Living each day new..
I ne’er again heard from you,
All dreams left unturned,
As I waited,
My life was burned..
Love,
Rakshitha.S
posted by rakshitha.s @ 5:41 PM
4 Comments:
Hi Raks,
hmmm... "Take care of ur thoughts they may become words".. this is wat happened.. you dint take care of them and they became these lovely poems. They are just too good..
a small piece of thought for u darling.. this is not copyrited :)
"last nite when all the word was asleep
i stayed up to think abt u & i wished on every star and the rain drops that came down
That somewhere where u r ,u would be thinking that i would be thinking of you. u were rite darling..
I was dreaming withyou through the nite.
And there is no other place I rather be than here in my Room
THINKING OF U ENDLESSELY.... "
:):)..
keep the good work going lil sis :).. i loved them .. each one of them have there own emotion attached to it.. ur poems pulled some strings harder :) then i thought they would.. so if that is wat was there on your mind when u were writing these . then mission accomplished :):)..
waiting to read more of these..
oh my god.. this is poignant and beautiful at the same time. loved this. Lot of thought has gone into it.. we'll talk about when we meet;-)
p.s: kiddo has grown up!
chinna,
they are lovely putta.... ur poems has the ablitiy to make rocks cry... EXECLLENT is all that i can say
With Love,
Akka
MY FAVOURITE...keep riting...:D
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