Fragrance of the wind

Saturday, May 3, 2008

LUCK

I planned a ride,
Deep into the woods,
All set to explore,
And excitement higher than it could..

Time arrived,
And luck wasn’t by my side..!

I saw a charming guy,
Who stole my heart away,
I needed to speak,
Even before, all ruined it lay..

Time arrived,
And luck wasn’t by my side..!

A very nice girl that I could be,
Expectations riding high on me,
I strived all day and night,
Only to know it dint even touch the tree..

Time arrived,
And luck wasn’t by my side..!

Truthful was I,
To save a life of innocence,
I fought all way,
To know it was all mere ignorance..

Time arrived,
And luck wasn’t by my side..!

Dejected, frustrated,
I went to give up life’s crown,
As I walked on the tracks
To lay my head down..

Time, finally arrived,
And.. Ah..! Even then luck wasn’t by my side..!

Love,

Rakshitha.S



9 Comments:

Blogger archana said...

Luck... :) :D.. i m confused to comment on tis one.. shd i comment on the way the poem is written or about the subject called "luck".. poems nicely written

May 3, 2008 at 6:52 PM  
Blogger Sachin Bhandarkar said...

hey nice poem..:) nice blog as well.. rock on gal !!!

May 4, 2008 at 1:19 AM  
Blogger Abhishek Kumar said...

neat poem.. stumbled on ur blog thru lakshman's. keep writin...

June 12, 2008 at 4:18 PM  
Blogger rakshitha.s said...

thank u..! :)

June 19, 2008 at 6:51 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

keep it up chinna... no words to say... no comments only compliments...

With Love,
Akka

June 23, 2008 at 8:19 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

HI rakshita, i like the way you write...Have fun..

September 21, 2008 at 10:51 PM  
Blogger rakshitha.s said...

thank u..! :)

June 9, 2009 at 8:51 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i luvv <3

July 25, 2009 at 10:30 PM  
Blogger What's Next said...

seredipity, stumbling upon your blog!

September 29, 2009 at 3:46 PM  

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